250 Word Response

On the outline of my paper I had many ideas that I was going to put on my paper but they were not well elaborated. What I did on my final draft was well elaborate my ideas and see if they were going to fit in to the point of my paper. For example, I had planned to make two different paragraphs one for sex drives and another for sexual attractions; in the end they both served better as one paragraph only. I combined both ideas and made one informative paragraph. Basically I reviewed my own work because no one commented on my paper so I fixed it based on my own criteria and I had a couple people that are not in our class read it for me, but other than them I didn’t get much feedback from my classmates.
The context of my paper is pretty much the same as I had planned it out from the beginning all of the adjustments were minor. The things that I changed were replace some words for others for example I replaced smaller words for larger more descriptive words. I reread the articles I was using a couple of times I wanted to make sure I didn’t leave any important points out and I got the right ideas. I had a hard time with my conclusion so I noted down some ideas and when I had it down my friend helped me elaborate on it and came up with a conclusion.